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Monday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
Welcome to the week.
Tuesday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
At least it isn’t Monday.
Wednesday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
It’s one hell of a long week, isn’t it?
Thursday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
Oh God, when will this week end!?
Friday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, go to party at a friend’s place, have a few drinks, watch a movie, flirt with that hot chick, stumble home at 1:00AM and don’t wake up until 1:00PM on Saturday.
Breaking the pattern is the key to happiness.
Welcome to the week.
Tuesday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
At least it isn’t Monday.
Wednesday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
It’s one hell of a long week, isn’t it?
Thursday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, watch T.V., go to bed at 9:00PM.
Oh God, when will this week end!?
Friday: Wake up at 6:00AM, shower, have breakfast, drive to school, sit through classes, drive home, have lunch, drive to work, do work, drive home, eat dinner, go to party at a friend’s place, have a few drinks, watch a movie, flirt with that hot chick, stumble home at 1:00AM and don’t wake up until 1:00PM on Saturday.
Breaking the pattern is the key to happiness.
When every day seems the same, what do you do to make life better?
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I like the idea you had for utilizing repetition, but overall I feel like the piece is missing something. I think it boils down to the fact that it's lacking a climax, but it doesn't seem to be anticlimatic in the right way either. Or in other words, it isn't interesting enough and doesn't draw enough interest from exaggerated dullness. I feel like changing the last line might already help a lot.